The night chill is getting colder as Fiona strolls down the familiar alley back home. Adrenaline rushed through her body as she felt someone stalking her.
Glenn plugs onto his ipod on a lonesome journey to school as usual, despite feeling nostalgia for his past relationship. The atmosphere’s degrades when a plump lady allows herself to sit next to him.
With an aghast and fast pounding heart, ryan jumps out of the car and dashes towards the body laying on the pool of fresh blood.
As he stares into the distance, he could just make out the brief silhouette of her walking towards him. His heartbeat quicken. The speech he prepared suddenly disappears from his sea of thought. Panicking, he quickly racks his brains, thinking of synonyms to express his feelings. This might be his last chance to do so.
Shia slowly picks up her phone and as it move towards her ear, that familiar sense of dread rises up her throat.
Diana pulls Wilson’s head slowly towards her chest, his right ear against the weak thumps of her dying heart, and it really makes him feel the pain she is suffering now
Looking down at her feet, she thinks to herself that she’ll never be able to walk again.
As the morning sun shines its raise through the curtain
Cherie sits in the dark corner of her room, sobbing and rubbing her wounds
With full determination, Aaron decides to end this journey with pride.
As Clara wipes her tears away, she thinks of what might happen to her half-paralyzed mum.
Ignoring the loud music his obnoxious brother played, Paul continue doing his homework
I think you have a mix of good and bad openers. I think Number 12 and Number 1 in particular, are too specific and tell the whole story. Number 7 and Number 10 however, are gems – really good! They have potential for story and show much variety and thought.
I think you have a mix of good and bad openers. I think Number 12 and Number 1 in particular, are too specific and tell the whole story. Number 7 and Number 10 however, are gems – really good! They have potential for story and show much variety and thought.
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