My victim number TWO, is a hmmmm, how should i describe him? CUTEST GUY EVER.
Saw him when i was at the rooftop of Serangoon Garden Country Club. The place is rather spacious, and i thought no one will ever come up like me to take a look at the up view of serangoon garden. But i was wrong, there’s this bunch of teenage boys (around the age of 15-18?) sitting in a circle. I was curious, so i changed my view from the scenery of serangoon garden to the bunch of guys ( with my laptop, so i can act as if i am not looking ).
And it was indeed a rather lovely view, a few of them were unexpectedly good-looking. And their flow of language are so mesmerizing, and i am utterly charmed by them. And i was obviously attracted to the one that was pouring the most words. trying to make his fellow friends laugh. The guy got his hair well cut, and from what i can see, he didn’t wax it or do anything to it. It is all natural! ( I LOVE ! ) The colour tone of his hair, is kind of like hazelnut, and he is well tanned. With those eyes that smile, and that perfect smile, he was able to capture the attention of all his fellow friends, as i can see all of them were really paying attention to every little bit of his nonsensical sentence.
I also observe that the language he uses, wasn’t like what Singaporean normally use. It is more of in a foreign style, where he uses those strange expressions to describe something. So, i guess, he must be a mix blood of Chinese and Australian? ( He got the Chinese look! ) His hands are always moving around, and he seems excited to talk, i suppose he must be talking about some cool stuff that his fellow friends never get to experience it like he did. His eyes widen every moment he starts raising his hands up, trying real hard to describe as specific as possible to make the conversation more interesting.
Creep by radiohead, suddenly played from nowhere, and i saw him standing up digging something out from his jeans’pocket. Ah, Creep must be his favourite song ( who won’t put his/her most love song as his/her ringtone? ) While answering his phone, I realized he slowly moved himself towards the railings of the rooftop. And he seems rather into the phone, and still with that cute smile hanging on his face. UGH, i got that weird feeling he got a girlfriend.( SHUCKS! ) soon after he hung up, he grabbed his bag from the spot he sat on and gave a wave to his friends before running down the stairs. And he didn’t even say “bye” to his friends before he went down the stairs. His actions were quick and swift, that all his friends were dumbfounded by his sudden farewell.
It MUST be his girlfriend, and he must be anxious to meet up with her, thats why he ran down the stairs so quickly. And that moment in my head, ” ugh, another cute guy attached!”
Dennis Alfred
13 Chuan Drive S555037
Your observations on the first character lacks the description of physicality and detailed thoughts on actions and behaviour while the second one is full of this. It’s important in true observation to be detailed, like you are in the second one so that you can use all those details to craft your stories.